Man... Really... I mean REALLY!! ... I'm proud of having read what you wrote here. My english is to bad to express you made me proud of considering myself as a writer, even a newbie one.
But let's (try to) talk about your poem. Like a general on the battlefield, leading his soldiers to a glorious and shinning victory, you talked to the soul of your audience and I believe each one of us, deviants, recieved today a lesson for life, for art. BECAUSE WE ARE ARTIST! You know, it's the first poem I read from you, and honestly, I think you're dedicated to become a great artist: as much for your style and speech that for how much you know how to "touch" you audience....
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But let's (try to) talk about your poem. Like a general on the battlefield, leading his soldiers to a glorious and shinning victory, you talked to the soul of your audience and I believe each one of us, deviants, recieved today a lesson for life, for art. BECAUSE WE ARE ARTIST!
You know, it's the first poem I read from you, and honestly, I think you're dedicated to become a great artist: as much for your style and speech that for how much you know how to "touch" you audience....
PLEASE, man. Go far!