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Man... Really... I mean REALLY!! ... I'm proud of having read what you wrote here. My english is to bad to express you made me proud of considering myself as a writer, even a newbie one.

But let's (try to) talk about your poem. Like a general on the battlefield, leading his soldiers to a glorious and shinning victory, you talked to the soul of your audience and I believe each one of us, deviants, recieved today a lesson for life, for art. BECAUSE WE ARE ARTIST!
You know, it's the first poem I read from you, and honestly, I think you're dedicated to become a great artist: as much for your style and speech that for how much you know how to "touch" you audience....

PLEASE, man. Go far!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you for taking the time to critique, I shall do my best to continue to impress you ^^

I may not always do powerful or inspiring works, but the beauty and magic of each piece is something that can never be lost.

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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